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In the article entitled
"Force-Sensing Gloves Cloud Control An iPhone By Detecting Gestures and
How Objects Are Gripped," Owen (2019) mentions that Apple created a glove
technically capable of engaging with technologies for individuals. This force-sensing (FS) glove is made of fabric meshed with conductive layers that sense the glove forces when the user touches a surface. Besides, this glove
will sense how much pressure is applied and the number of fingers used. The
author also states that Apple will look at different ways to control an
application without interacting with the touchscreen. The FS glove will include
conductive strands woven together with normal threads and monitor contact outside, while the inside contains sensors for compression from
the fingers. According to Owen (2019), the FS
glove has the capability to replace handheld controllers in Virtual Reality
(VR) and Augmented Reality (AR). Although Owen (2019) explains the features
such as the functions and how it is made, he
does not explain the advantages of using the FS gloves.
In contrast, there are other benefits to the FS gloves. For example, in a study by
Ye, Seyedi, Cai, & Lai (2015) reported that FS gloves were designed
for motorcycle riders. This study was conducted on
the FS glove created for motorcycle riders due to the high risk of
motorcycle accidents such as failure in human perception, decision errors and
loss of control after an extensive ride. This article states that the
team was focusing on FS glove that provided real-time feedback for adjustment of
hand performance during the ride. Therefore, with these issues, the
research team developed the FS gloves, where hand action precision improved to "80 per cent" and would also operate even in a
high-speed working environment, according to Ye et al. (2015). On top of that, the FS gloves are capable of tracking both
force feedback and hand actions simultaneously. Thus, with these major feedback factors, motorcyclists
can avoid expected accidents. Furthermore, the
study of Da Silva, Gonçalves, Mendes, & Correia (2011) using FS gloves were
seen to benefit the disabled patient.
According to Da Silva et al. (2011), the cost of a regular
treatment for stroke cases in 2010 cost 73.7 billion dollars. The study
implemented FS glove on stroke patients to improve
their movements during rehabilitation while promoting self-confidence to
prepare them when returning to the community. FS gloves improve movement and
monitor the patient’s movement in actual time. This is because individuals with strokes
faced weaknesses and disabilities to do
an activity on their own. Hence, this FS glove was simply
designed for individuals with hand disabilities.
The glove preference of sizes, material, and styles
can be easily produced. Therefore, this study
shows FS gloves' creation did benefit the patient and was a successful
project.
Therefore, in Ye et al. (2015) and Da Silva et al. (2011), both studies reported that using FS gloves was a success and effective. As a result,
Owen (2019) study plan may be a great plan which may
bring great benefits and achievement, such as the other studies. However, the
study by Owen (2019) was not further reviewed. A calibration test was not done to
define the baseline measurement to reduce inaccuracy done on both
studies of Ye et al. (2015) and Da Silva et al. (2011). Therefore, the study
of Owen (2019) may be considered incomplete, and thus the outcome will be
unknown.
References
Da Silva, A. F.,
Gonçalves, A. F., Mendes, P. M., & Correia, J. H. (2011). FBG sensing glove
for monitoring hand posture. IEEE Sensors
Journal, 11(10), 2442–2448.
https://doi.org/10.1109/JSEN.2011.2138132
Owen, M. (2019).
Force-sensing gloves could control an iPhone by detecting gestures and how
objects are gripped. Appleinsider. Retrieved
on 27 January 2020 from
https://appleinsider.com/articles/19/04/18/force-sensing-gloves-could-control-an-iphone-by-detecting-gestures-and-how-objects-are-gripped
Ye, Q., Seyedi, M., Cai,
Z., & Lai, D. T. H. (2015). Force-sensing glove system for measurement of
hand forces during motorbike riding. International
Journal of Distributed Sensor Networks, 2015.
https://doi.org/10.1155/2015/545643
Thank you, Fadzly, for this improved draft. You would still need to refine your organization of ideas, making sure that you have topic sentences that connect back to the thesis/controlling idea, but the language you use here is much improved.
ReplyDeleteHi Prof,
ReplyDeleteYou are most welcome. Thank you for all of your guidance that enabled me to learn even more and improved myself further in writing this draft. See you around in school prof.
Cheers,
Fadzly